October 20th, 2010

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erikvern

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Bà con nào sửa giùm mình 2 câu cuối nhé! Nghe có vẻ Vietnamese quá! Hjc... Và chổ nào không ổn thì comment giùm luôn nhá! Thanks!

When my darling
gets up in the morning
And opens all the windows
A gust of fresh, cool wind
smooths her hair
And sunlight kisses her forehead
They make me envy
She smiles as saying "Good morning!" to a new day

Oh! My darling
I've never seen you in such an angelic way
I've been in love with you
Not only the simple way you're in
But wholly whoever you are

Oh! My darling
Looking at you face - to - face
My heart was jumping so strongly
Although I was trying to behave as a close friend

Oh! My darling
You didn't know how I felt then
All my love had been laid on you

Oh! My darling
You may give us both a chance
Let me light up your life
 

MinhThy

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Erik có nhạc cho bài này không? Post lên luôn đi Erik, có nhạc thì dễ nhận ra những chỗ không ổn hơn á.
 
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erikvern

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Hjc...Erik tự sáng tác lời nhân dịp 20-11-2010 vừa qua sau khi đi chơi với người Erik yêu về. Hjc...Không có nhạc. Chỉ mới là A Rhythm of Love thôi. Hj...
 

Pearly

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Bài hát nếu có nhạc sẽ dể sửa lại lyric hơn....
 
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